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Don’t get me wrong, I love the show. I really do but I think the writing could use some proof reading. For example:

1) Why have Peter jump off a building to see if he can fly? No normal person would do that. Instead, have him try to fly like a normal person would OR introduce into the story how he must overcome his fear of heights and/or death before he can fly.

2) If you had the ability to stop time and cheat in poker, why would you switch cards in such a way that it becomes obvious to the other player, heads up, that you cheated. Who is that stupid?

3) How does everyone know the guy is Haitian? Considering a lot of white people have a hard time telling one black guy from another (just look at all the innocent people in jail), I find it extremely hard to believe that Matt Parker can tell the guy is Haitian by appearance alone.

4) I thought the Haitian’s power was to suppress other people’s powers. Why didn’t he stop the radioactive guy from going off? If not for that reason, why bring him to the house in the first place?